second draft of documentary

This is the second draft of my 5-minute extract of a documentary.  I have improved it by following what I have written in the feedback. However, for the interview part, I haven't really break each question yet. I still need to add the montage sequence about the university students. I also need to add a voiceover to make a direct message to the audience about what's happening before the interview started. 

Feedback of the second draft:

- The caption at the start would read better if it said 

' The Impact of Covid 19 on Millions of Students ' 

- Mako gets covered up by a box with the quote - you need to make sure that doesn't happen - have a look at the use of words on screen around that point

- What it needs is you to bring all the different parts together, maybe using your voiceover or some more music.